Narrative Opening - English

 In English, we are still continuing our creative writing: The Narrative. We are doing different tasks for each activity, I just finished the show and didn't tell the task, now I am doing the Narrative opening. Narrative Opening is a technique that you can use to hook your readers attention by making the opening really interesting and make them feel curious about your writing. In this task we need to do 3-5 narrative openings, I decided to do 3 since I still need to do the other tasks. I enjoyed this because it challenged me and I've learned a lot while doing this task but I'm not sure if I did it right. 

This is my work:

                                                      Narrative Opening # 1

Hugging my knees, trying to keep myself warm. Smiling to those people walking passed as I got my phone out to check the time but my smile faded as I saw my background on my phone. I took a deep breath and put my phone back in my pocket. But someone caught my attention, widening my eyes as I realized taking my phone out and yes, it's him.

Narrative Opening # 2

Sneaking and hiding trying my best to avoid those suspicious stares. Sweats starts to drip all over my body as I get closer to the exit. I started to close my eyes and take the last step and leave the store without feeling guilty at all.

                                                     Narrative Opening # 3

Crying, shouting, those are the sounds I can hear around me. Firefighters trying to stop the fire as I stand there comforting my sobbing mother. A tear escaped my eyes as I saw the firefighters bringing someone's body from the burning house. As they get closer, realization hits me, there he is the most important person to me.