In our English class, we started our new creative writing activities matrix. Unlike the first one, the activities this time is harder compare to those activities that we did in our first creative writing matrix. The first activity that we did is the "Show no Tell", for this task we have to rewrite some sentences without telling the actual meaning of it but instead you need to show the meaning but writing the sentences that in your own words or way. This is the sentences that we need to rewrite for this task:
"The buildings were tall
Sarah was really upset
She was so happy to see him
The lake is beautiful."
Good mahi Shiela -- Great introduction and 'showing' sentences. To improve, try extending your descriptions to 2-3 sentences each. What sort of scenery is at the lake? Help your reader to picture what it looks like in their mind. Keep it up, ka rawe! :)
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